Hi! Just a tiny editorial suggestion: "She was visiting Albany alone due to her husband's frail constitution when her and your father met" should probably be, "...when she and your father met," if you want to retain that structure. (Alternatively: "...when she met your father," or "...when your father met her.")
Otherwise, this looks really compelling and I'm intrigued to see how the story develops!
This looks great so far. I already decided I'm picking the Lady of the household as the RO in my first playthrough. Does the demo stop at the options of chapter 1 and save game??
Hi, and sorry if this is a bother but I am super interested in reading this, sadly with an eye condition that is worsened by reading white text on black backgrounds, I cannot as it stands. Is it possible to add a "light mode" option to reverse it so it is dark text on a light background like this page is?
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Hi, I was just fixing another bug in the game and had to re-upload the file-- you may have clicked while I was in the middle of doing so. Maybe try again? If that's still an issue, definitely post another comment so I can get that fixed.
The writing is so interesting!! I'm curious to see who the love interests will be! Perhaps writing a description would help people understand what the story will be about?
Hi, this is a text-based interactive fiction, so I'm a bit confused on what you mean by screenshots-- are you talking about screenshots of the actual text?
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I just played the prologue and I enjoyed the writing and story!
Hi! Just a tiny editorial suggestion: "She was visiting Albany alone due to her husband's frail constitution when her and your father met" should probably be, "...when she and your father met," if you want to retain that structure. (Alternatively: "...when she met your father," or "...when your father met her.")
Otherwise, this looks really compelling and I'm intrigued to see how the story develops!
Thanks for the little editorial suggestion, and glad you enjoyed!
This looks great so far. I already decided I'm picking the Lady of the household as the RO in my first playthrough. Does the demo stop at the options of chapter 1 and save game??
Yeah, for now the only content out is the prologue. And glad you enjoyed!
Hi... uh is there only the prologue? cuz I can't play after the prologue... I'm on a Mac, playing on safari [browser]
Yep! As of right now, there’s only the prologue, but I hope to update soon :)
okie thx!!
Hi, and sorry if this is a bother but I am super interested in reading this, sadly with an eye condition that is worsened by reading white text on black backgrounds, I cannot as it stands. Is it possible to add a "light mode" option to reverse it so it is dark text on a light background like this page is?
Of course! I’ll fix that right now :)
Thanks! Interesting start, looking forward to more!
you should add a link to your tumblr!
Wow, this is immersive. The writing style feels exactly like an inner monologue and flows very naturally. I cannot wait for more!
WOAH!!! Phenomenal writing, I'm definitely hooked! I can't wait to see how this IF progresses.
Tysm :) If you’d like to follow the IF as it updates, my Tumblr is bridehall-if. Glad you enjoyed!
This looks promising! I'm positively intrigued<3
Firefox browser version, I press start and see this.
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Hi, I was just fixing another bug in the game and had to re-upload the file-- you may have clicked while I was in the middle of doing so. Maybe try again? If that's still an issue, definitely post another comment so I can get that fixed.
It seems that was the case! That's such a funny coincidence.
The writing is so interesting!! I'm curious to see who the love interests will be! Perhaps writing a description would help people understand what the story will be about?
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it :) If you'd like more info about the ROs and the story in general, my Tumblr is bridehall-if.
Hi, this is a text-based interactive fiction, so I'm a bit confused on what you mean by screenshots-- are you talking about screenshots of the actual text?
Apologies, I didn't realize it was a Text-based game.
i was intrigued by the comments and i am certainly not disappointed, very good job
Thanks :) My Tumblr is bridehall-if if you'd like to follow the game as it updates.
oh my God what just happened
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Ooh this already seems sm fun!! great start <3
Thanks so much <3 If you'd like to follow the game as it updates, my Tumblr is bridehall-if.
The start is promising and the story intriguing.
Thank you sm :)